God I have given you all and now I am faithless
God one hour and fifteen minutes October 18, 1989
I can’t stand my thoughts.
God when can I stare down at you?
Go save yourself with your prayers
I’m not feeling well don’t bug me.
I won’t do my job till I’m ready.
God when will you be inferior?
When will you repent your sins?
When will we finally meet?
When will it be your turn?
God my flesh and blood are just as tasty
I’m sick of your restrictions
When can I walk down the street without being haggled?
After all it is you who spawns crystal moons and liquid orbs.
Your demands confuse me.
You made me want to be a rebel
God I’ve read your book I’m not convinced
God I have no choice but to put my fate in your hands.
God one hour and fifteen minutes October 18, 1989
I can’t stand my thoughts.
God when can I stare down at you?
Go save yourself with your prayers
I’m not feeling well don’t bug me.
I won’t do my job till I’m ready.
God when will you be inferior?
When will you repent your sins?
When will we finally meet?
When will it be your turn?
God my flesh and blood are just as tasty
I’m sick of your restrictions
When can I walk down the street without being haggled?
After all it is you who spawns crystal moons and liquid orbs.
Your demands confuse me.
You made me want to be a rebel
God I’ve read your book I’m not convinced
God I have no choice but to put my fate in your hands.
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5 comments:
great poem i liked how you used god, "God I have no choice but to put my fate in your hands" love that line, great work
This poem evokes very common thoughts that make a lot of people probably uncomfortable and that's what makes it so sexy and provocative. I feel the same way about religion. Who the hell knows which one is right.
wow this is awesome, i was trying to write one like this, but you really did a better job lol. I really like the line "When will you repent your sins?" that's just awesome, no one ever thinks of God having sins.
i had written a response to this, but the stupid computer didnt post it. why does the computer have to be stupid? why cant it be my own fault it didnt post right?
anyway.
the idea of you, or me, or anyone else looking down at god is absolutely mind blowing. i love that line
"God I’ve read your book I’m not convinced" as for this line. god didnt write a book, nor shall he ever. maybe you can tweak it so that..ZOMg! address people who have tried to enforce this notion of what god is supposed to be for you. naw mean?
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